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The Writing Topic

Post by Tornado » Wed Oct 13, 2010 5:59 pm

Uh...~ I figured since we have an art topic and a singing topic, we should have a creative writing topic to. Rules are simple.

Write how you feel. It can be a poem, a fanfic, a story, ect.

Just have fun.



No "adult" stories though. xD

I hope this board gets approved...~
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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by Myu-chan » Wed Oct 13, 2010 10:09 pm

Hm, I like this topic. I hope it can be approved too, though I don't see anything wrong with it.
Well, here's my last story. It's nothing professional or whatever. ^^'
Once I went to an amusement park.
It has everything a normal one has.
It’s a colorful and lively place with balloons, rides, laughs and happiness.
But, there’s something different from the other parks.
There’s a little Girl living in that park.
She’s a carefree and sweet girl.
Tripping around the park, smiling and greeting everyone she meet.
You may wonder, “Isn’t scary? Specially during night, all alone…”
No, it’s not scaring. Not for her.
The little Girl have three special friends.
The Gorgeous Ballerina.
The Imaginative Balloon Vendor.
The Hilarious Clown.
They are always there for her, not letting her be alone.
Although the Day has come. After many others, many weeks, many years.
The little Girl felt more tired than ever.
She knew what was happening. Her friends also knew that.
She lay in her bed with tired eyes, staring her three friends fixedly.
“I am scared. It’s true, I am. Even if I already knew this was going to happen.
I hope everything keeps the same. I love this place, I don’t want it to change.”
The little Girl said closing her eyes.
“Good Night” were her last words.
And she entered an endless sleep.
Or she thought she would.
The little Girl suddenly woke up.
Both of her breathing and heart were accelerated.
It was like her heart would ran through her chest.
She seemed to be scared with something.
Recovering her senses, she noticed she was on the entrance of the park.
She got up and looked back to the park. Her legs trembled almost falling to the ground.
Her eyes were fully in tears. The park she knew for all her life,
Was now shattered. It was dark, abandoned, destroyed.
The warm colors had turned into the cold black and white.
The warm laughs were now a deep and uncomfortable silence.
She finally fell to the ground. Shocked, scared, desperate.
“What happened? Who did this? How long I’ve been sleeping? Why? Why?”
Questions after questions. No answer for them.
Only the intoxicating silence that devoured the park.
The little Girl wiped her tears and raised.
She was scared, but that park was too important for her. She had to do something.
Looking around, she noticed, some meters from there, something new on the park.
Three Arches.
Not giving a thought and joining all her courage and forces
The little Girl ran towards the first Arch.

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This will continue on “The Gorgeous Melancholy”.

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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by Merun » Thu Oct 14, 2010 7:24 am

No o.o topic closed


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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by Yatchen » Thu Oct 14, 2010 3:13 pm

*whacks Merun

Looks like a fun topic to follow. ;3
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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by BamBam; » Thu Oct 14, 2010 10:44 pm

Ooh~ <3 I topic I'd love to follow~
I have alot of poems.. but I won't throw all of them in here. xD;




Thank you, for the pain.
It drove me to insane.
People stare.
It’s almost as if they care.
It’s like they know.
The secrets I can’t show.
The scars are easier to hide.
They’re buried with my pride.
Hatred turned into abuse.
Never to be cut loose.
Make this all a dream.
No one hears me scream.
Blood shed by my own hand.
Waiting. Alone is where I stand.
I don’t need you to help me.
I just need you to see.
I’m not at all insane.
I enjoy this pain.

Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
Who's the cutest of them all?
You of course, are the cutest of them all.
Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
Who's the fairest of them all?
You of course, are the fairest of them all.
Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
Who's the bravest of them all?
You of course, are the bravest of them all.
Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
Will Prince Charming ever be mine?
I am sorry, he will never be yours.
Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
Who's the worst of them all?
You of course, are the worst of them all.
Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
Who's the poorest of them all?
I do not know, who the poorest of them all are.
Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
You're the poorest of them all.

It's so selfish of me to expect,
You to cry for me after then.
My long periods of disappearances,
And expect your consolations.
How can you be so selfless,
And continue to hold my hand?
Am I expecting too little?
I really don't understand.
How can you love,
Someone so loveless?
It's so selfish of me to love,
While I'm so broken hearted.

To explain most of those poems, are because life is pretty hard in my life right now, well it always is. c:
Half of them was for a loved one of mine, but things are better now. <3
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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by yuna » Fri Oct 15, 2010 12:31 pm

Fun topic looks fun! :D Finally a place to get some feedback on my poems! These are old, but I still love em, I'll only post one for now.

This one is titled Broken Hearts~

Life's sweet when you have love,
Even when its brief.
Love is precious,
When you never hide what's underneath.

The world may fade,
But love lasts.
Love is forever,
Even when lost in the past.

Time goes by,
But love stands still.
Love is passion,
Even when our hearts are ill.

Holding you closely in my bed,
I just can't get you out of my head!
Kisses so sweet as the sun sets in the sky,
Please don't ever leave my side.

The rain may fall,
The tears may come.
But loves forever,
Why didn't you call?

I was sad and alone, but no one came.
Shivering, Crying, no one came.

Then it was over,
My heart in two.
Like broken glass,
Because of YOU!



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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by Nue » Fri Oct 15, 2010 1:59 pm

Hmm... There is actually a song I wrote. My friend asked me to write one since he's an expert at Vocaloid, and, well... The result was this:
Snow White of Silver Armor

I am your servant
Your charming prince
Your wishes are orders for me
"Once upon a time" and
"They lived happily forever"
Our dream is eternity
Can I really make you smile forever?

Maybe kiss your lips
When the evil witch made you bite the poisoned apple
As your charming prince
I shall wake you up from this malicious curse
Because maybe I can make you happy
I am the one who loves you the most
Wake up, my princess

Your golden heart or the blazing sun
Which shines the most?
I wait here for you, your eyes don't open
Why is this? Am I not the prince you wished for?
The birds sing, the tears fall from my face
How can this be? Isn't our life a fairytale?

I am your servant
And still your charming prince
Wake up from this dream, my princess

My armor turns into a fancy light blue dress
All the scenario is now a hospital room
A dream, it was, in the end
I am no prince, I am no servant
Why can't I face reality?

But then I look up
Someone is smilling at me
"My princess, finally you woke up", he says with tears in his green eyes
So I am the princess, and he is my prince
I must smile, I finally woke up from eternal dream
But something was never right from the very start
"Who are you?"
And then I realize...

I'm not your servant
Nor your charming prince
Realize my wishes as orders as they are

Now, the sky is crying
I hold my two-handed sword
Looking up, where clouds are grey
I bite the poisoned apple
And I fall asleep
Back to my fairytale...

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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by Tornado » Fri Oct 15, 2010 2:00 pm

Nice poems/stories. Keep it up~! ^~^/
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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by AngelLily » Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:18 pm

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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by Tornado » Fri Oct 15, 2010 8:35 pm

Your very talented, Lily. Pink text for your epicness.xD

You should become a writer. All of you~


I wrote this poem a few months ago, about my eating disorder. Ah, here you go:

I look in a broken mirror,
I Look within the glass
Try to vision a perfect doll
but all I see is hunger

She's slim, she's perfect
With skin oh so cold
Her lips seem sewn shut
Her body is like an angel
How I want to be that doll

The floor is cold under my feet
The toilet calls my name
My body trembles as my finger goes down
There goes my anger and hate

I'm broken down, I'm very scared
I hate the monster in me
I want to fly, I have no wings
I am just a dream





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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by AngelLily » Sat Oct 16, 2010 9:45 am

Thank you, Tornado. <3

Also no, that's not bad. I think it's full of emotion and expression.

I'm glad to see some many of you seek expression through writing <3
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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by yuna » Mon Nov 01, 2010 1:09 pm

Let's re-awaken this thread, I've got more poems for you. Written years ago. This one's called:

Close Hearts
The night's radiance glimmers

In the stars and moon,

But nothing else matters when

I'm next to you.



The sun shimmers

In the crystal lake.

No words can describe,

The happiness you make.



My world may crumble.

My smile be erased.

Tears may fall,

I may stumble.



But when you're here,

All I can do is smile.

Because our hearts are connected,

Our destinies intertwined.



The heart of love,

The heart of friends,

The heart of compassion,

We'll stand together at the end.



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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by Myu-chan » Fri Nov 12, 2010 11:03 am

That's a cute one Yuna. ^^
Here's one I wrote yesterday.
The Flower Lamentation

The happiest day of a woman
The lovely words and the sealing kiss
Suddenly is all gone
Leaving this White Flower alone.

Dancing, dancing I am
My crying heart is no longer felt
Dance, dance through the night
In this beautiful Lament

The brutal despair and tears
Fed this sin controlling my hands
With this metallic seed and a single movement
I blind myself from the world

Dancing, dancing I am
My heart is no longer heard
Dance, dance in this darkness
Oh! Sinful Flower.

Dancing, dancing I am
These cold feet will never stop
Please God, allow this Transparent Flower
Dance forever her first and last Waltz of Lament

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Post by Beato » Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:16 pm

I could totally get behind this topic. I love writing. <3

This is actually something I wrote a while ago but it's still my all-time favorite piece. <3

And thiiiiiis is something I wrote for English class a few years ago. Another favorite. I'd kill to see someone put it together with some images and turn it into an actual children's story. OTL

What I'm working on right now is sort of a self-growth thing, though. Going through a bit of a tough time, so I'm using the 30 Letters/30 Days challenge to try and get out what needs to be said. I'm terrified of what the recipients will say when I'm done and they read them. OTL

If anyone else wants to try it with me, it's as simple as it sounds. Write one letter a day to a specific person. Doesn't matter if the same person falls under more than one day, either. And you don't have to post them if there's things in the letter that you don't want anyone seeing. <3


30 Days/30 Letters

Day 1 — Your Best Friend
Day 2 — Your Crush
Day 3 — Your parents
Day 4 — Your sibling (or closest relative)
Day 5 — Your dreams
Day 6 — A stranger
Day 7 — Your Ex-boyfriend/girlfriend/love/crush
Day 8 — Your favorite internet friend
Day 9 — Someone you wish you could meet
Day 10 — Someone you don’t talk to as much as you’d like to
Day 11 — A Deceased person you wish you could talk to
Day 12 — The person you hate most/caused you a lot of pain
Day 13 — Someone you wish could forgive you
Day 14 — Someone you’ve drifted away from
Day 15 — The person you miss the most
Day 16 — Someone that’s not in your state/country
Day 17 — Someone from your childhood
Day 18 — The person that you wish you could be
Day 19 — Someone that pesters your mind—good or bad
Day 20 — The one that broke your heart the hardest
Day 21 — Someone you judged by their first impression
Day 22 — Someone you want to give a second chance to
Day 23 — The last person you kissed
Day 24 — The person that gave you your favorite memory
Day 25 — The person you know that is going through the worst of times
Day 26 — The last person you made a pinky promise to
Day 27 — The friendliest person you knew for only one day
Day 28 — Someone that changed your life
Day 29 — The person that you want tell everything to, but too afraid to
Day 30 — Your reflection in the mirror
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Re: The Writing Topic

Post by Yatchen » Thu Nov 18, 2010 5:57 pm

Oh, I'm doing this too, on my LJ.
It can be pretty intense. I've cried a few times while writing. ;;
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