SmileLilith
UTAU Maniac
May 27th, 2010 2:09 AM
-head falls off- ; -; Welp. Yours is better than mine. xD
angelhalo777
V_Phantom's & Seith's Master!
May 27th, 2010 2:09 AM
A Continuation of
http://e-shuushuu.net/images/2010-01-06-231440.gif
of course after seith blew me up i had to changed forms this is the story of how i got my title
part 2 will come soon! oh and since Kage change his avatar to Doctor Who i actually found a really
cool Dr.Who Anime art hope u like
Myu-chan
Nana's Knight
May 27th, 2010 2:19 AM
Haha, I like Ytachen in the end writing "Yatchen waz here! XD" lol
angelhalo777
V_Phantom's & Seith's Master!
May 27th, 2010 2:22 AM
Myu-chan wrote: Haha, I like Ytachen in the end writing "Yatchen waz here! XD" lol
i do too that "WAZ" my favorite part of the comic XD
BlueberryChan
Nomming On My Leeks♪ >ヮ<
May 27th, 2010 2:43 AM
So cute~ I like Yat Chan's part to :3
V_Phantom
Cardmaster!
May 27th, 2010 3:08 AM
I got a bad feeling 'bout what happens next o_oU ... But it's A-OK, it wouldn't be the worst thing
that has happened to me so far. Keep on going... Erh... Boss? ^_^U
Just a little observation: There's no way the Phantom would even try use Noriko's form. Noriko is brave, pure and awesome; the Phantom is not. A good match for the Phantom is actually Judau Ashta, the annoying protagonist from Gundam ZZ... But thanks to certain events I'm stuck as Judau's little sis Leina; mostly a proxy association than a fair match.
Unfortunately, there are
very few pics of Leina 'round here; (and anywhere else, in fact) but the good news are that I've got some screencaps that could be useful:
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?gjv0mzuiz21Still, is a rather modest set. -_-U I miss Judau, it was easier to finds pics of him.
AngelLily
Rare Type:Pink Mod
May 27th, 2010 3:14 AM
Hmm. A little constructive criticism here; your baloons seem out of order. You need to set an specific order and follow them. They must be read from right to left or left to right. Never begin from the middle baloon, the continuity is broken. :3
Anyway, keep them coming~ ^^
angelhalo777
V_Phantom's & Seith's Master!
May 27th, 2010 3:17 AM
AngelLily wrote: Hmm. A little constructive criticism here; your baloons seem out of order. You need to set an specific order and follow them. They must be read from right to left or left to right. Never begin from the middle baloon, the continuity is broken. :3
Anyway, keep them coming~ ^^
Alrighty then thanks 4 the cirticism Angelily
Seith
The Swimsuit Expert
May 27th, 2010 4:12 AM
I don't know what are you gonna do to me and V, but I aware of your action and expect the unexpected situation. Araaa~
Rikenta
(◕ω◕✿)
May 27th, 2010 6:04 AM
How dare you two! TT ~ TT Baka Seith-nii and V ! XD Anyways! Wahh! I rabu it > w < Thankies and
Good Job!
> w <
Kagemaru
Shuu's own Toothpaste Boy
May 27th, 2010 6:15 AM
A bit more constructive criticism: There seem to be a few weird characters (kanji?) in the text bubbles on panels...wait, hold on, those are numbers. We're supposed to read those in that order. Right, okay, then I'd say follow Lily's advice, I've got nothing else to say on that. XD
And as for the rest....well, try to work on your spelling, use of interpunction and use of capitals. And yes, I do quite enjoy that graphic of 10! :)
Yatchen
incarnadine.akuma
May 27th, 2010 10:28 AM
Maybe make the words fit into the bubbles a little better too. :3
-Yatchen waz here.
BoomBoomCha
✖Invader.Alice
June 16th, 2010 10:33 PM
Hmph! My magic would turn you all into chibi's so I feel tall!! ;;Four foot ten;
MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!