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Everyone seems to improving everyday D:
And I'm not at all, orz.

Well, as I should be asleep, I drew this.
http://soravalentine.deviantart.com/#/d3bg6zk
Japan is in a terrible state right now...

@Andell: I think it needs a bit deeper shading on the hair and socks, but other than that I lurves it~! ^0^

@Rikenta: I actually think that's one of your best.
Really emotional.


Ehem...
Because I haven't posted any for a while...
Some USUK... ^-^;;
This is the last from my little series of images.
Now to move onto something new

@Rikenta: Are you kidding me?! That picture you drew is an amazing improvement! It's so deep, and well drawn. c:

Here is my coloured version! > w < I made a version with a background, But I don't know if it looks too great to show. >_<"

http://trinity-in-rainbows.deviantart.c ... -200706443

EDIT: Background version. =.="
http://trinity-in-rainbows.deviantart.c ... -200732028

@Trinity: Gah! Why is your work so good?! *pouts*
I like that the lipstick matches her eyes ^-^


I did some crappy sketchy stuff~
Just an OC
Just wanted to draw some of my own characters while I work on Uni stuff and then get back to doing some fanworks

@LilFlow
really pretty~ nice to see you do some original for a change ^^
do you plan on putting some colors?

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watched Tangled. fell in love. decided to do something simple~
xD



-- edit [19.03]

That's lovely Rabbit! I love her long hair! :3

A cute Animation: http://trinity-in-rainbows.deviantart.c ... -201572809

And! Ta-da! I submitted a video on a "How I colour eyes": http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NoYoRSqwXL0

n//v//n

Hi! I just wanted to show a few pieces of my own artwork.


http://green-kun.deviantart.com/art/O-h ... 3560&qo=14
This was done during December, and I think I'm very sentimental about this particular piece. I kind of secretly put reference to a man I adore into the picture, which was thankfully not noticed by him. But I asked him what he thought the people would be saying. So, I followed his advice, as his suggestions were hilarious.



Last summer, I did this piece for a Digital Illustration project I had :3
http://green-kun.deviantart.com/art/Man ... 3560&qo=68
It could have come out a lot better, since it was my second time with Photoshop. XD

It's paperchild's time !

[IMG=http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/898/ ... ldfini.jpg][/IMG]

One of them is meant to hold a door handle, and another one can be used without the hands (just standing) or with the hands, (having the chin and below part hidden by an horizontal surface).

@Rabbit-tan: Nah, that one's going to stay in tone.
I kinda like the feel of it that way ^^
Also: I <i>love</i> Tangled!

@Andell: Nice paperchild.
Wanting to see photos of her~

@Trinity: Cute animation!
Good to see you getting back into drawing again


A new OC pic to celebrate the start of Spring!

(Or at dA here)

Start of spring? Nice image~
You need to start practicing necks~

Tensa wrote:Start of spring? Nice image~
You need to start practicing necks~

*pinch* There's nothing wrong with her neck, it looks perfect as it is!
It's amazing x)
I wish I could draw like that..
Lucky. =w=

It's called "pushing the artist to do a better job" *teleports Bam to a basketball game, in the middle of the field*
Criticism~

Oh hey~ Dengeki Daisy avatar~

Erm... stop fighting please? lol
I think it may be because I forgot to give her a collar bone, so her neck looks a bit chunky
I fail at the little details ^^;;

owo really cute image! love the hair and her eyes, and she a really lovely expression as a whole~!

..first attempt at drawing a fake screenshot orz


of all my girls, i think i love her fighting style and her weapon best;

Since LilFlow's drawing is the only one I can see at my job, I'll only comment this one (and most specifically the neck, since everything else's so lovely).

There's no problem with the upper part of the neck; it fits well with the head and it is okay globally too. The part making it look chubby is when related to the body. The left part is perfect, so let's look at the line to the right.

It reaches the body too far to the right (too close to her left shoulder). To correct it, the neck would have more angle (going down and a bit more to the left). And since the neck connect smoothly to the body angle, you might want to add some curve to it (curving to the right, at the bottom end of the neck).

This said... When you start getting this kind of serious criticism of your drawings, you know it means people actually care that much for your perfected work ! It's the most common way to pay respect to art. After all, the message is not: "You sucked at that part of the drawing, you should practice more", it's rather: "Darn, it's so lovely... if only that part had been as great !"

It's a funny fact... Criticism is somewhat a compliment to all that was not criticized. It's therefore the opposite of complimenting something specific.

'sounds weird to say, but... Lucky you to be criticized.~

By the way, I've adjusted a bit the shading from my last drawing before putting it on Devianart; you were quite right about it.